counter on blogger

Pickle Me This

January 9, 2007

Shift

I’m about midway through the second draft of my long project, and I’ve decided to shift from first person to third. I’m not convinced it’s the right decision, but I have to try it out and see. And so I am going through my story carefully, changing all the ‘I’s to ‘she’, and no doubt missing quite a few. It’s good though, because at this point in my work, it’s effective to go through the entire story carefully and see how its functioning as a whole. Changing the narration forces me to go through it carefully. I also have a feeling that it will make my narrator more likeable.

Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *

This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.


New Novel, Coming Soon

Book Cover Definitely Thriving. Image of a woman in an upside down green bathtub surrounded by books. Text reads Definitely Thriving, A Novel, by Kerry Clare

Manuscript Consultations: Let’s Work Together

My 2026 Manuscript Consultation Spots are full! 2027 registration will open in September 2026. Learn more about what I do at https://picklemethis.com/manuscript-consultations-lets-work-together/.


Sign up for Pickle Me This: The Digest

Sign up to my Substack! Best of the blog delivered to your inbox each month. The Digest also includes news and updates about my creative projects and opportunities for you to work with me.


My Books

Book cover Asking for a Friend


Mitzi Bytes



 

The Doors
Pinterest Good Reads RSS Post